Friday, November 27, 2009

Weeping Upon the Grave

Dark shadows cast upon her face  I put my hand on her heart and felt heartbreak  Her tears stung my soul like acid, her cry stabs me like a knife  I walked upon this broken beauty to see her try and end her life  She looked into my eyes I felt her excruciating sorrow  Her father had broken her she wasn't shore she's see tomorrow  I wanted nothing more but to rip his heart right out of him   Make him choke on his own dick and tear him limb from limb  I whispered in her ear "My love everything will be okay."  What he did to her is what happens to me every day. I kissed her satin lips  Tasted her sweet passionate kiss  But her blazing sadness was deep as an abyss  No matter how far I went she didn't want to be saved  Her knife pierced both are hearts as I weep upon her grave. 
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  • Shannon's Avatar
    Posted by Shannon Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:15pm PDT

    WOW!

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  • Kendra's Avatar
    Posted by Kendra Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:15pm PDT

    Darkly beautiful!

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  • Shannon's Avatar
    Posted by Shannon Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:17pm PDT

    I didnt mean wow in a bad way, I really dont know what to say, sounds like you are really hurting,been hurt, and are full of anger, I'am here if you need or want to talk.

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  • dolphin™'s Avatar
    Posted by dolphin™ Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:23pm PDT

    Sianna,

    Powerful Writing!

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  • Ravina's Avatar
    Posted by Ravina Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:25pm PDT

    Sounds alot like your heart would say it. BEAUTIFUL!!!

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  • Ravina's Avatar
    Posted by Ravina Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:25pm PDT

    Shannaon 7 your right. Were all here

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  • Ravina's Avatar
    Posted by Ravina Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:26pm PDT

    Srry Shannon 7 spellt ur name wrong my bad

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  • Shannon's Avatar
    Posted by Shannon Wed Jul 8, 2009 5:39pm PDT

    That is ok lol no worries

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