Thursday, November 26, 2009

Thinking out loud

I thought i could live without you until i saw your smile again,,,
I thought you were over me til i heard you say you loved me, again,,,
I thought life was ending until you made me believe that there was still hope,,,
I thought i was headed towards a dead end til you directed me down a different road,,,
Pain is my art but i dont wanna hurt anymore,,,
although heart break fuels my creativity i just wanna feel the blissful characteristics of love which i've never felt before,,,
you brought me closer and closer to that feeling with ever laugh, kiss, hug, and touch,,,
all i want is to have that all over again i dont think thats asking for too much,,,
I'll start from the bottom and work my way up,,,
I'll do whatever it takes to regain back your trust,,,
moments are passing like street lights leaving us with thoughts of what are we to do,,,
except reach out and grasp ahold of them and i'd gladly weather the storm, rain, and hurricanes
as long as in the end theres still a "me & you"
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  • RyneishaB_05's Avatar
    Posted by RyneishaB_05 Mon Jun 8, 2009 8:00am PDT

    Very nice poem...i enjoyed it:)

    Its so easy to say that you dont love someone and you can walk around as if you dont love that person...but when you see their face and those old feelings rush back and it makes your body feel so numb to anything trying to harm it then you know you still love that person...sometimes you try to act as if your 100% happy with the decisions that was made and you start claiming someone else as your # 1 or "the f--- in best" but when you sit down and really think about it...i mean like who do you really love you know what im saying...so i try to keep it real with myself and others at all times...i tell people when they ask me..."yeah we still friends, and i do still have feeling for him" im not gonna front about it cuz thats real and im me regardless of what happens :)

    Nice poem!!!!

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  • TyneshiaH's Avatar
    Posted by TyneshiaH Fri Jun 12, 2009 11:25am PDT

    good poem

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  • RyneishaB_05's Avatar
    Posted by RyneishaB_05 Wed Jul 8, 2009 3:02pm PDT

    Thanks for stopping by my post babe...i appreciate that fareal:) Your always gonna be my #1 fan...lol

    Talk to you later:)

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  • Kenda's Avatar
    Posted by Kenda Wed Jul 8, 2009 3:37pm PDT

    That was nice. Really good.

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