Friday, November 27, 2009

She's Magnificent...


She's magnificent, the way she loves.
The ways she care, is unlike anyone.
I have ever met in my life.
She is the one that claimed my heart.
The one who will own it for all eternity.
I cannot believe I met her last year.
She is magnificent, the way she cares.
I know that many of her thoughts.
Are of me and so is the love she sends.
The way she walked, made me smile.
The way she smiled, made me smile as well.

She was perfect and pretty.
Even though many did not think she was.
Her concern for me.
Showed me, that there was.
Someone that cared for me in this world.
I hope she sees just how magnificent, she is.
One day I hope to tell her face to face.
Just how magnificent she is.
To tell her just how I feel for her.
I wonder if she will ever tell me.
How she feels for me.
I enjoyed the way she made her faces.
When she was happy.
Her laughter, I can still hear.
Even though she is miles away.
I can still see her, like if she is still here.
She is magnificent, the way she will be there.
Her faith is strong and so is her love.
For now all I can do is write.
About how magnificent she is.
No matter what people will say about her.
She is special in every way.
Her life has been full of pain.
Time for her to see, who she is.
That she is magnificent.
A caring person.
A woman that is beautiful.
She must admit to herself.
That she has a right to be happy.
To find love and freedom.
All I can do is hope that one day.
She will see the truth.
That she is magnificent.


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  • Hope's Avatar
    Posted by Hope Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:11pm PDT

    What a beautiful poem. I am sure that she will feel special when she reads this one poet. The pictures and music are perfect. Hope

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  • Luna Marie's Avatar
    Posted by Luna Marie Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:13pm PDT

    Nite,

    Telll her!!! ... Telll her!!!

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  • Destiny's Avatar
    Posted by Destiny Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:58pm PDT

    This is a beautiful poem.

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:04pm PDT

    First comes love......

    then BOOM! with a POP!

    You got it bad, brotha!!

    You are 100% in love with her.

    Congrats!!!

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  • J Montana™'s Avatar
    Posted by J Montana™ Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:04pm PDT

    Sexy Pics ,....Btw!!

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  • tamara's Avatar
    Posted by tamara Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:43pm PDT

    Hey whats up nice pics and excellent poem. Have a great day or nite or whatever you are having! LOL

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  • Jigga187's Avatar
    Posted by Jigga187 Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:50am PDT

    That was absolutely mind blowing. I envy your ability to express your emotions on such a deep level. Everyone who reads this poem is rooting for you to get the girl. I on the other hand wish that my stalker would fall back and stay his out of control a$$ at home with his "wifey".

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  • Jigga187's Avatar
    Posted by Jigga187 Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:28am PDT

    Can I ask you a question Poet OS? What exactly went wrong last year? And what besides the obvious fear of rejection stands between you and at least telling her how you feel. I can't speak for her, but as a woman who has been single for quite sometime, I would appreciate it if a "NICE" guy just said, "hey, I like you."

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  • Crystal's Avatar
    Posted by Crystal Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:55am PDT

    Hi os,

    So beautiful poem!I like it.I think you have to tell her how you feel.

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  • The Poet OS™'s Avatar
    Posted by The Poet OS™ Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:55am PDT

    Shreky, there were a lot of things that happened, it had a lot to do with each of our families. My family is more to blame for chasing off, the person I wrote this for, they were jealous of her spending time with me. There is more, but I do not wish to leave it on a comment.

    Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem, have a good morning. :o)

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