Sunday, November 29, 2009

Life After Death ( from the abyss and back )



I can't write like I use to write.  I use to write and write.

It's like I wrote about love my whole life, but so what,

My hatters been hating my whole life, til my last breath,

might be the first time they felt right...

and you know what, sometimes I want'um to feel right.

I wasn't wrong. I feel like I'm too grown to fight.

Aint no back and forth. Ev'ry lick I could give is so right,

like so precise aint no way to heal up, til next life.

All I need is once. Most people keep fighting to die twice,

once they fall in love, hurt falls outta love on a sharp knife.

If I'm past that, then why would I pass on advice like most fools

with nothing to show, but sound nice, til they look nice.

They love old fools with new life cause they'll take fire

and kill that flame with salt ice.

Though I thought I died. I lived through the tears I couldn't cry.

I fell instead. I started out falling, now I can fly.

When I speak my soul, it opens like wings across the sky.

I'm so deep in love that my deepness of love is a new high.

Come join me. True hearts wont break and don't die,

though time heals, you can't love life if you don't try.


By: The Silent Knight

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  • GirlyGirl©'s Avatar
    Posted by GirlyGirl© Thu Oct 1, 2009 8:43am PDT

    Michael, this is amazing! With a capital A! You have a real talent here. Show us more of your work...please! GG ♥

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  • SILENT KNIGHT's Avatar
    Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Thu Oct 1, 2009 8:54am PDT

    Thank you and I appreciate the love, so my last and final pieces will be dedicated to all those in love. Some endings lead to new beginnings.

    I wish you all the joy and happiness in between.

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  • Kmonica's Avatar
    Posted by Kmonica Fri Oct 2, 2009 11:58am PDT

    "you can't love life, if you dont try" That is true wisdom!

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  • casy's Avatar
    Posted by casy Tue Oct 6, 2009 7:31am PDT

    Only when we try....Can we get to some where....Good.....Casy

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  • Sinister1's Avatar
    Posted by Sinister1 Fri Oct 9, 2009 8:54am PDT

    :)

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  • Jigga187's Avatar
    Posted by Jigga187 Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:28pm PDT

    Still brooding? It's all good. Oh, and it's "haters". 1 "T" hon.

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  • Aira's Avatar
    Posted by Aira Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:48pm PDT

    i'm with you all the way baby...

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  • PoetWithCancer's Avatar
    Posted by PoetWithCancer Sat Oct 17, 2009 6:15pm PDT

    This poem is so good, that all the way as I read it, till I reached the end and saw your by-line, I thought it was the work of a major poet whom you were quoting.

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  • Sky's Avatar
    Posted by Sky Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:41am PDT

    Nice to see you're on your way up:)

    The pendulum never stops.

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  • casy's Avatar
    Posted by casy Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:26am PDT

    GREAT SWEETS......

    STOP BY AND HELP ME NAME MY NEW PUP/DOG...NEW POST....LOVE YA XOXOX CASY

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