Tuesday, November 24, 2009
If She Was Mine...
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If she was mine.
I would treat her like a
queen.
Give her the respect she
deserved.
Shower her with lots of
love.
But, she would need to
see.
Just how much I care for
her.
To see it's okay to trust
again.
That what men before, did to
her.
Will not happen
again.
I am here to support
her.
To wait and see the day she
realizes.
That I am the one for
her.
Till then, I'll just have to look up at the
stars.
Make a wish and hope it comes
true.
That one day she will be
mine.
To spend my life
with.
To grow happy
together.
If she was mine.
I would make sure no one would ever hurt her
again.
To make sure no one, takes advantage of
her.
I miss her a lot.
I hope that one day I can go to where she is
at.
To look into her eyes and
smile.
That for now is just a
dream.
It is a hope and a
prayer.
She is beautiful.
I cannot deny how I feel for
her.
No one can make me change my
mind.
No one will ever interfere
again.
She is the one, meant for me.
The one, I hope to have in my life, forever.
Till the end of time itself.
*For the woman in OK, that has my heart and I hope one day, tells
me how she feels for me.
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Posted by Hope Sun Oct 11, 2009 5:51am PDT
Poet, what an incredible gift that you have! This is pure, true beauty and love. This love of yours, she is blessed to have you to love her so unconditionally. The pictures and music perfectly chosen to complement your poetry.
God Bless and enjoy your weekend,
Hope
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Posted by Kendra Sun Oct 11, 2009 7:36am PDT
I hope the woman you're speaking of knows how special/important she is to you. Awesome Poet!
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Posted by Gail Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:22am PDT
wow u must be phsycic! she does deserve that so beautifull i read it to my mother who is the queen of the queen im becoming >and i must say its a beatiful way to enter the age of the queens thank u baby that made my day> Deeopatra
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Posted by Gail Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:26am PDT
wow thats so sweet and when i hear thing s so sweet it hellps me keep it going one more day as long as i tell myself its people like u i do it for>and i bet if she gets any spot of highauthority she worked and suffered AND sacraficed alot to get there< and overly deserves it at a very young age almost cleopatar like
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Posted by sparky Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:17am PDT
call me a skeptic - but it appears that the poet is a woman - men just dont express themselves in that way.
however, it was lovely.
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Posted by Super Abuelita Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:24am PDT
Another wonderful work of art!
Keep on writing!! Your talent is amazing!
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Posted by The Poet OS™ Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:24am PDT
Sparky, I am a guy, not a woman. There are many guys that express the way they feel about love through poetry, especially over on Originalpoetry.com. Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem.
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Posted by Cheri Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:47am PDT
MOST WOMEN WANT THAT KID OF LOVE,, IT'S SO PURE! REAL MEN ADMIRE THEIR WOMEN. THANKS FOR PUTTIN THIS OUT THERE FOR ALL TO SEE! CONTINUE YOUR POETRY!
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