Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Heaven scented



                                 I think this very beautiful view from heavens lookout


                                                                      Insight

 
                                When heaven is in someone you are entwined closely,

                                                                  Understand

 
                                 Then seek those keys and feel the way of floating

                                                                   Cloud-nine

 
                                  To heaven you travel journey of Fate sends you notice


                                                                    Celebration



                                        If you believe... in dreams and happy pathways too


                                                                    Travelling

 
                                       Take those keys and unlock your way to paradise of

                                                                       Pleasure

 
                                     Warmth like loving angels realizing heaven is us


                                                                      Together


 
                                  We can release when next to a half of an entire pull the

                                                                          Lever

 
                             That release the brakes then craft us to feel so free

                                                                          Trust

 
                                 All our emotions flutter so energy persistently compels

                                                                          Vision

 
                                      Don’t disappear from the place you woke and found

                                                                         Imagery

 
                                    Where interaction together of two souls are bound

                                                                       Visionary

 
                                    Leads to finding a place so right new beloved season
 
                                                                     Heartfelt

 
                                     Good beyond reason or rhyme a discovery of verse

                                                                     Momentous

 
                                If you get to heavens door it’s beyond mortal description

                                                                        Amazing

 
                               Knock to seek entrance to unlock and start feeling alive

                                                                          Inside
 

                            Take a deep breathe whisper Love too see you here now


                                                                         Forever

 
                               In a place that’s flowing recovered a story unthinkable

                                                                        Indecision

 
                              Receive my hands offer so bite your flavorsome tongue

                                                                          Insatiable

 
                            Smile and be sure I'm hoping to share a slice of heaven

                                                                         Breathing

 
                            So make no mistakes your where you should have found

                                                                         Protection

 
                                 Welcome to heaven its right where you belong in clear

                                                                           Address

 
                              True lovers make magic through souls rightly entwined

                                                                             Deeper

 
                                 You now own a piece of heaven that you romanced


                                                                           Entrance

 
                                     Affectionate friendly so kind it’s eternally memorable

                                                                         Vibration

 
                                   Wide awake and growing aware you become conscious

                                                                             Intention


                                      Sensitively established the kind  perfection your souls

                                                                          Revival

 
                                   To be Destined too feel in someone else Light and love

                                                                         Together

 
                                         With no envy spite or dissatisfied dying end to a

                                                                         Dreamer
 
 
                                      Heaven where lovers embrace the peaceful experience

                                                                             Forever

 
                                   That’s above all else and beyond the imaginations

                                                                            Invention
 

                                  If you get a chance to knock at the door for ever after

                                                                           Linking

 
                                    I 'll unlock and open it and ask you what took you so

                                                                              Longing
 

                                        Wont hesitate too be anywhere else but in a blissful


                                                                              Heaven
 
                               
                                         It’s my favorite place to visit as long as your smiling

                                                                              Contented
 

                                       You’re the only one who can bring senses alive with

                                                                                Value
 

                                         To taste and touch the sight and sound of heaven to
 
                                                                                 Attune
 

                                    The musical memory of melody in
the air treble Bass

                                                                            Symphony

 
                                 In its wholesome song that words become so much more

                                                                            Loving

 
                                  That day you walked through my door you mended souls

                                                                            Interior

 
                                   You were like the cure to the mundane days so ordinary,

                                                                           Sparkling

 
                                     Neutralizing all past rain drying flowing tears healing

                                                                              Fire


                                        Happy mostly to be reheated to a shimmer in heaven

                                                                             Star-shineve
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  • PoetWithCancer's Avatar
    Posted by PoetWithCancer Fri Nov 6, 2009 5:34am PST

    Dear Sinister 1,

    In my opinion, this is the best poem I have read so far on Shine. Certainly, it is the one I like the best. And I have read many good poems on Shine, some of them quite excellent.

    You have almost invented a new form. In fact, maybe you have invented a new form: A poetic line of several words, followed by a line consisting of a single word; repeated to the end of the poem. I never saw this form before, and I am quite familiar with the poetic forms, from the simplest to the ornately complex.

    I love the sound that this form creates--enhanced, of course, by your excellent diction, your apparentlyly intinctively perfect selection of words.

    This poem made me feel many different emotions as I read it. Awe of life and the world. Awe of the universe. A strong sense of the value of life and the value of love. Appreciation for both. Then, as a sudden surprise, a certain amount of eroticism, provocative and yet tasteful, and also carefully accompanied by true caring love.

    In my opnion, this poem is a great poem. Which makes you a great poet.

    I'm glad I came across it and had the honor and pleasure of reading it. I hope you will be able to get it published in a book or a magazine or both.

    Thank you.

    Bye now.

    --PWC

    aka Mr. Poet

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  • SILENT KNIGHT's Avatar
    Posted by SILENT KNIGHT Fri Nov 6, 2009 6:20am PST

    Very hypnotic and captivating.

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  • PoetWithCancer's Avatar
    Posted by PoetWithCancer Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:53am PST

    I am so dismayed that more people have not enjoyed your truly great poem here. Your poem deserves to be read by the world.

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  • Sinister1's Avatar
    Posted by Sinister1 Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:10pm PST

    poet your too kind

    I post on www.origionalpoetry.com

    my nick is Tempy if you enjoy my work thats where i post most of it. but you have to register to read

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  • vickyangelvampgirl's Avatar
    Posted by vickyangelvampgirl Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:54am PST

    that was so cool and yes it was captivating and awesome

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